Loading ...The Lure of Emmanuelle Elie’s Brown Eyes
Dec 10th, 2007 by Felix Alaita
She said she writes poetry
I said nice
She said she loved my floe-try
I said likewise
My Chronicles of a Million Eyes she admired
I said why?
“Cause I tried to write the lure of my brown eyes
And it turned out not right”
I wondered why…
Why would a writer’s pen stop drooling the right words pouring from the talented mind
I imagined her scribbling
And feeling every piece expressed was a bunch of gibberish starring hard into the all seeing eye
I thought for a second
Could they be like The Cynical Eyes of Mildred hmm…I doubt if that could be right
Then I saw why…
When she sent me a photo with a burst of her face to give it a try…
Hypnotized…
Now I am a believer…
Eyes wide shut
A term I like so much
for its deep vibes perceived to mean your eyes are open
But you seem to see not
The impression I got in this revelation of sorts
Beautiful eyes exquisitely captured by the camera’s shot
So crystal clear and pristine you are blinded by the glare
For once I see eyes … that outshine a perfect smile
These are Emmanuelle Elie’s Eyes
Look into them and tell me I lie
Tell me I exaggerate with words…
You don’t feel the search inside
Tell me you don’t drown so easily
in their dark pools with long black lashes,dark as night
Words defy me, but deep down inside I know there’s a reason why…
Inundate me, recreate me-inadequate vocabulary as I stare into the lure of her deep brown eyes
Emmanuelle Elie, I agree…
Your eyes defy and make the writers pen shy!
Thank you
Her eyes!
So………Hypnotizing!
A beautiful idea! Beautiful words! Hypnotizing in every way…
Hello there!
I got your message at mybloglog and nice post on her eyes.
you write so well and I’ve always wondered why you’re still with Blogrush and not with Entrecard.com….
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I guarantee it!!! Sign up, my friend. I’ll write a stunning recommendation for you over there when I see you signed up already.
Marvin,
Am happy another guy agrees. I was beginning to wonder…
Marvalus,
Very kind words from you. Thanks a mill.
Hey Woobie,
Thanks for the advice, checking it out already and expecting that recommendation :-d
she has adorable eyes
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Well written and yes the eyes are something else… but what about that smile!